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Started by Mr.Obvious, May 07, 2023, 10:31:43 AM

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Hydra009

#15
July 31, 2023, 09:59:50 PM
My money is on match stick.  "Matchy" in a overly-familiar, taunting tone could be very grating.  Otherwise, coppertop or some variation of "clown/bozo" would be my top pick.

Unbeliever

#16
July 31, 2023, 10:15:39 PM
How about V8?🤓
God Not Found
"There is a sucker born-again every minute." - C. Spellman

the_antithesis

#17
July 31, 2023, 11:38:38 PM
Quote from: Hydra009 on July 31, 2023, 09:59:50 PMMy money is on match stick.  "Matchy" in a overly-familiar, taunting tone could be very grating.  Otherwise, coppertop or some variation of "clown/bozo" would be my top pick.

Well, it is a fantasy novel. The common thing here seems to be red things. So, what's red in your world and turn that into a slur, ladybird.

aitm

#18
August 01, 2023, 05:03:58 PM
For some reason, lipstick sprang into mind..........
A humans desire to live is exceeded only by their willingness to die for another. Even god cannot equal this magnificent sacrifice. No god has the right to judge them.-first tenant of the Panotheust

Mr.Obvious

#19
August 21, 2023, 07:33:45 AM
Over 30.000 words, but hitting some harder to make interesting chapters.
I fear it may be too dull for you long until the protagonist gets to the mines :s
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.

Gawdzilla Sama

#20
August 21, 2023, 08:20:09 AM
Amber Shambler
We 'new atheists' have a reputation for being militant, but make no mistake  we didn't start this war. If you want to place blame put it on the the religious zealots who have been poisoning the minds of the  young for a long long time."
PZ Myers

Mr.Obvious

#21
August 21, 2023, 10:23:00 AM
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.

Gawdzilla Sama

#22
August 21, 2023, 11:35:14 AM
Quote from: Mr.Obvious on August 21, 2023, 10:23:00 AMWhat´s that, mate?
Out of context.
We 'new atheists' have a reputation for being militant, but make no mistake  we didn't start this war. If you want to place blame put it on the the religious zealots who have been poisoning the minds of the  young for a long long time."
PZ Myers

the_antithesis

#23
August 22, 2023, 12:14:10 AM
Quote from: Mr.Obvious on August 21, 2023, 10:23:00 AMWhat´s that, mate?

The redhead thing.

Mr.Obvious

#24
August 22, 2023, 02:20:40 AM
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.

aitm

#25
August 22, 2023, 11:27:22 AM
Ah yes the red head. How about the common "yo, riding hood"!
A humans desire to live is exceeded only by their willingness to die for another. Even god cannot equal this magnificent sacrifice. No god has the right to judge them.-first tenant of the Panotheust

Blackleaf

#26
September 26, 2023, 06:20:44 PM
How's your progress so far?
"Oh, wearisome condition of humanity,
Born under one law, to another bound;
Vainly begot, and yet forbidden vanity,
Created sick, commanded to be sound."
--Fulke Greville--

Mr.Obvious

#27
September 26, 2023, 06:32:09 PM
Hit a snag at work xhich has sapped dome time.
About 35.000 words.
Thanks for the reminder.
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.

Blackleaf

#28
September 26, 2023, 07:51:47 PM
A whole thirty-five words? I'm at 28 3/5 words myself.

Just kidding. I find it funny how we use commas here to separate every fourth digit, while people on the other side of the ocean use a period. Sorry. "Full stop." lol
"Oh, wearisome condition of humanity,
Born under one law, to another bound;
Vainly begot, and yet forbidden vanity,
Created sick, commanded to be sound."
--Fulke Greville--

Mr.Obvious

#29
November 12, 2023, 10:43:18 AM
Lost sight of this for a while, but picked it up again.
Only managed 500 words, today. But i´m going to try to add to that this evening, after dinner at my parents´.
36000 words, about.

Gotta get back in there
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.
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